Your thoughts on my poem, please?

You know, a novice of poetry might say I'm nuts to say this, but I'm not a novice--and you have a talent for writing which you should explore. I believe poetry is observing something felt by the senses and describing what that is to the reader. In this poem you have picked out the nuances of things---not the surface, but what lies beneath. You've made us think, but not strained our brains.You've seen and described things we've all seen, but never realized we saw . That's what a poet does, so like it or not -----you're a poet-----unwrap it-----it's a gift! Title suggestion--Thoughts For Thursday(What Lies Beneath)-----Great Job------------------------------------w…